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Third Exercises Academic Writing

33.1 Fill the gaps in article about collocation

Collocation in English falls into a number of different categories. In this article, I should like to draw a distinction between 'ordinary' collocations and those that are so fixed that they can be called idioms. Although my main focus is on 'ordinary' collocations, I shall also to some extent take idioms into consideration too. I plan to raise a number of questions about learning collocations in a foreign or second language. I shall attempt to answer these questions by makes reference to work of the leading writers in the field. My intention is to make a strong case for a more intensive focus on collocation in the language learning process. I shall also touch on issues such as pronunciation.

33.2 Complete this collocation
1. Assess the significance of a factor.
2. Argue something very convincingly.
3. Draws an analogy.
4. Lend support to an argument.
5. Put forward an argument.
6. Hold firmly to a belief.
7. Draws attention to a new trend.
8. Lays emphasis on one factor.
9. Disagree profoundly with someone.
10. Draws a conclusion.

33.3 Choose the correct collocation.
1. This paper presents the case for the complete revision of the theory.
2. Recent research suggests that Jackson's theory of economic development is flawed.
3. The autor of the book adopts an  unusual position on the topic.
4. The writer of the article states his opinion very clearly.
5. The article concludes by briefly summarising the main points that the author wishes to put across.
6. The writer draws some interesting parallels between life now and life in the Middle Ages.
7. I hold firmly to my belief in the importance of basic human rights.
8. The book raises some key questions but fails to deal with them in a satisfactory manner.

Reading Book "RIO"

Good Day Friends..

Today I learn read a book titled "Rio with subtitle Blu and Jewel "
This book publish by "A Twentieth Century Fox Film"

In this book tell about bird called Blu and Jewel (who is a blue Spix's Macaw). They meet in Rio and on one night they are caught by Marcel with white bird and put they into small cage with chain in their legs because Jewel try to escape when cage would be closed.

After Marcel and Nigel (white bird) went out, Blu opened the cage door, suddenly Jewel flies out from the cage with chain in their legs. After that they falling down because Blu can't fly.

In the rain-forest They meet with Rafael. Rafael thought they will gone to carnival and invite them to meet Luiz Rafael's friend to release their chain and go together to carnival.

After release chain in their legs, Blu have planning to going back at home but unfortunately for Jewel she caught again by Nigel and bring Jewel to Carnival. Knowing Jewel was captured by Nigel Blu decided to help him with the help of Luiz.

When Blu looking for Jewel suddenly Nigel also capture Blu and put Blu into cage together with Jewel after that Marcel put the cage in the plane. Once again Blu open the cage door and Jewel ready to flies out but Nigel hurts her. Jewel injured finally can't fly and falls out from the plane and Blu try help Jewel and suddenly Blu can fly and caught Jewel.     

Second Exercises Academic Writing

31.2 Change the words from singular to plural
1. There are some interesting Ph.D. theses on water resources in the library.
2. What was your main criterion in designing your survey?
3. She was interested in a strange phenomenon connected with comets.
4. The hypotheses were never proved, as the data were incomplete.

31.2 Match the beginning of each sentence 
1. We must never accept the notion that intelligence is connected to race.
2. The task of choosing an analytical framework is an important stage in any research.
3. The book expresses his viewpoint on the role of the United nations in times of war.
4. Tennen has always made her stance on gender and language use very clear.
5. Consumers have different perceptions of what low price and high quality mean.
6. The report laid out a new model of family healthcare which changed everything.
7. Physicists developed the concept of dark matter to explain certain observations.

31.4 Read the text and then answer the question
1. Autonomy
2. The humanities
3. Profound
4. Thinking, understanding
5. Moral
6. Grounding

First Exercises Academic Writing

30.2. Match the beginning of each sentence with the most appropriate ending.
1. The article explores the origins of the concept of democracy.      
2. One small explosion set off a chain reaction, causing massive damage.
3. The confusion probably stemmed from a lack of communication.
4. The proposed new tax could have major consequences for larger families.
5. The disastrous events of 2003 gave rise to a widespread sense of disillusionment.
6. The judge explained that there were precedents for his decision.

30.3 Choose the correct word
1. De Routa`s work in the 1970s  influenced  the development of computer science.
2. The acid seemed o have no effect whatsoever on the plastic.
3. Everyone hoped for a positive outcome upon  the meeting between the two governments.
4. The reason of the failure of the project was a lack of funding.
5. The impact of global warming on the polar ice caps is now understood more clearly.
6. The journalist wondered what particular ending the government had in mind when it decided to build a national  tennis academy.

Note : Please check my writing sentence if any wrong sentence please inform me :)
Thank you

First day academic writing

Good morning

I am Anwar and today is my first day for academic writing intensive class in Kumamoto University. I hope after follow this class my ability in academic writing would increase, although class held on 5 days.